Egg

tiny stories

so perfect

clean, smooth, white

a tiny heartbeat inside

then a crack

and out comes

life

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Something that nobody ever thought someone would write! ;)
Things that are un-noticed and unseen are the things that could be the most interesting of them all..
And you wrote and expressed what you felt about an egg that nobody would even care to write about and that's what makes this poem unique!

It's a short and sweet poem.. Really enjoyed reading it..! :)

[St.Jimmy]

wow thats so short.........
but so cute, so beautiful and true
"a tiny heart beat inside"
my favorite line
everybody knows this but nobody tries to write
Good job
~Aaradhya

[Antonio Valentino]

Whether you eat them or not aren't eggs a wonder!
Being a chef instructor I probably have a deeper understanding and appreciation for these culinary marvels.

Thank you invisible for giving this amazing little food its due.

Very nicely done!
Antonio

[Angel's Lady]

Wow. I felt this piece rather than read it. And the title fits so aptly. What a wonderful write. Good job.