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Tied in Knots


A Poem by InvisibleInk

All of the lives that I've tried

were cheap

All of the lies I told

tongue and cheek

however I try to unfold it

I am a knot tied tight

and stuck in the stomach

laced up and around

those organs that beat

twisting so deep

becoming impossible to hide

the face I created

waiting for time to come

waiting for that book to open

while the wind whipped through me

and blew right out of my mouth

 

 


© 2009 InvisibleInk
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Hello, "The New Statue of Liberty Speaks" was the first of your prose that I read just after I sent you a help message regarding my retarded profile pic. And because I liked- "The New Statue of Liberty Speaks" . I found myself traveling down to this next one - "UNTITLED" yet another great work. As far as a title, not that you were serious, but I thought something like...
"Knot so deep"
"I am a knot", "so deep inside"
or
"Knot my Life"
"lives that I've tried", "knot tied tight"

But I think it important that you give it its title. I am just a reviewer (per this submission).
In quotes of course up above next to my suggestions for a title, I have pasted what words from
your poem that had influence over my two suggestions.

Thanks,

Curtis

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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