Baby Feets

Baby Feets

A Poem by Invisible Ink
"

for my little babe

"
My heart
is the thing that beats
every time I see
those little feets

© 2010 Invisible Ink


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Thanks everyone!
Alicia, when you have a baby, you talk like this! LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so sweet! Written very simply, but it's easy to see the love behind it. One thing though: "feet" is already a plural, so "feets" isn't really a word… Other than that, it's amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


SO Sweet!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS! LOVE IT!

Posted 13 Years Ago


How sweet and endearing. The sentiment is felt through visually and emotionally...for the "feets" and the maternal "beats". Lovely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 13, 2010
Last Updated on November 20, 2010
Tags: baby, children, childhood, parenthood, mother

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Invisible Ink
Invisible Ink

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"I guess I wrote in invisible ink, Oh, I've tried to think how I could have made it appear"- Aimee Mann Open the cage and set the bird free. I am a writer. A poet. Words have saved me. I am a .. more..

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