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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.

You said you loved me but I walked away,

Now after all these years and countless lies,

For the first time since that night,

I see you..... 

Laid down,  all cold and white.

Tears roll down and burn my eyes,

I kneel to kiss you goodbye,

And the only words that cross my mind,

Are the ones I whisper,   before I turn away one last time.

I Love You.

Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

This has an incredible level of depth with how few words you use. I particularly liked the way you transitioned the whole poem around the fourth line, something so succinct to join two poignant segments. The second part really reminds me of many things I have scribbled in the dark. Those nights fearing what it would be like to lose someone who means everything to you, even if you don't know how much they matter to you yet. Love the imagery in your second to last line.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you so much for your kind words.
And yes the fear off loss is often the greatest.

[Redboy]

Short, sweet, and beautiful. Not many of my poems sound this good. Great job man!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you .

[armin]

beautiful write Angad. Deep ,tendered, sweet and incredibly written. Thanks for sharing.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you.

[B.J]

So tenderly written..Vivid imagery

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you.

[B.J]

your welcome

[Travis "Phoenix" Caldwe..]

A very sad thing to picture in my head. I feel like crying. Beautiful piece of work!!!

[Angad Waraich]

Hey!
Thanks for reading ma man!

[Travis "Phoenix" Caldwell]

My pleasure :D

[The Black Warrior]

Wow, this is beautiful, full of emotion...but it is true, "Love knows not its own depth until the hour of seperation."

Well writen, I love it!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for your reading and reviewing.

[alice3wonderland]

beautiful once again! You are a fantastic writer

[Angad Waraich]

Hey!
Thank you so much for thorn kind words. =D

[Laura Lynn]

This happened to me in my life as well, "such sweet sorrow..." the feeling of regret that overtakes one I mean

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for dropping by. :)

[Tania]

What a beautiful simple poem. Full of emotions.... Love it !

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you. :)

[Chris]

Emotionally taut and holding... believable.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you very much.

[Chris]

saying goodbye is a real part of life...

[Angad Waraich]

It is indeed.

[Mazie]

wow this is a beautiful poem. So full of emotion, very sad... you are very talented my friend, wonderful piece, thanks for sharing

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you so very much for your kind words they mean a lot.