The Eclipse

His and her story I -The eclipse

HIM & HER

THE ECLIPSE

And this how their story goes...

“Sitting in a room,

Staring at black and white,

He fell in love at first sight.”

“She hears him call,

And returned the smile,

Didnt know why it felt so right.”

“He smiled as he talked,

How could he not?

Falling deeper in love with ever second that passed.”

“She spends time with hin now, and cant sleeep at night,

How could she?

For she rediscovered her smile long lost.”

“He called her every night

And listened to her breathe

Till the light broke, the dark sky.”

“She waits by the phone all day,

And wishes the night would never end,

Because the heavy walls were falling of her chest.”

“Soon he hears the whispers,

Her whispers of pain,

Locked deep within, away fron the world.”

“She heard him say ‘I’ll never leave,alright.’,

Then she broke down in his arms crying,

And saw her endless tears run dry, by his lullabys”

“He held her close,

Determined to never let go,

As he felt complete for the very first time”

“She looked deep into his eyes,

And felt happy to be naked for the very first time,
Oblivious to the world outside.”

“He kissed her goodnight,

As thunder stuck,

And she stiffened by his side”

“Her broken heart finaly one,

She was in love, LOVE!

She woke with a start, the horror back in her eyes”

“He saw her fear, and held his breath,

As his heart skipped a beat,

Before he began his final lullaby...”

“She wanted to run into his light,

And so she tried to fight,

But slowly her past crept up and took over her mind”

“He fought on.

Against the raging tide,

Shegave up and whispered

‘Stop before we loose sense or wrong and right...’”

Their Eyes met again one last time

Wet with pain

The dream was over they realized

“You are my moon...”

“And you my sun...”

They then kissed,one last time

Frozen forever in time

Till the next eclipse....

Author's Note

Hey, guys! Exams over and finally a respite from college. I promise to catch up soon and this time for real.
Cheers!
So this is an experimental piece and something i have been wanting to do for a long time, i hope you enjoy.
Oh! and as always feel free to comment, feedback is always appriciated.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Angad... You are an artist of romance...
I knew at first glance... Lovely to be young
and wise enough to know the essence of love.
truly touched by moonbeams. Pat

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, much appreciated.

[Noopur]

BeautiFul !! Very well narrated , a picturesque one!!
Thoroughly enjoyed !!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you Noopur :)

[Chris]

The typo's are distracting...

The poem held me... the thoughts were well woven.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you Chris. Will edit the piece soon. :)

[Matching Socks]

Wow, this was very good. I really enjoyed this one and felt the words.
Lovely writing.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for reading Ana. Glad you enjoyed :)

[Emily]

I really like this!
Very well written!
Keep it up!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you:)

[Riddhi]

Nice poem...I liked the way you expressed it with your words...Great work...Eager to read your next writing...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for your kind words, I look forward to reading some of your work too.

[hardeep sabharwal]

I like the format of this love story, very nicely elaborated well done

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you sir, will try and read some of your work soon .

[Sami Khalil]

A very interesting format for a short love story. I like the comparison with the sun and the moon. Exams are over so let the flow of ink begin. Excellent, sir.....:).....

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you sir. And yeah, more coming soon!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ......:).......