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Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Crazycatgirl_10
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Well I don't know how to describe this other than its a metaphor to describe depression.

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I'm drowning in the weight on this world
Everything is suffocating me
Help me I can't breathe

All the signs are there
I'm drowning before your eyes
Help me I can't breathe

Why aren't you doing anything
Do you even care?
Help me I can't breathe

I see your hand reaching down
Pulling me up from the darkness
Help me I can't breathe

The water is going down
The darkness is fading to light
Thank you for helping, I can finally breathe

© 2015 Crazycatgirl_10


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this is a beautiful poem, it drew a picture in my mind, lovely!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh wow. This is a very remarkable poem. I feel the pain from this poem as I read through the lines. It is so dark yet so beautiful at the same time.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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I'm crazy. I'm unique. I'm a crazy cat lady. I've had my various struggles in life. I try not to let them stop me though. I study hard to get good grades. I have a job which I love. I love spending ti.. more..

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