Stupid Girl

I know, I know

Instead of pulling away,

I hand you the knife to cut deeper. 

A masochist for your rejection

I swallow my desperate

pathetic

shred of hope 

that will make you worth it.

More than willing to give another chance

so you can kiss away my tears you caused

and thrill my soul you shattered.

All I want is your love.

your bloody inconsistency drives me to

obsession.

A mask upon my heart

I bleed for you.

over and over again.

Reviews

[Rachelle]

woah.

[Lexi Nicole]

Powerful, yet desperate. You certainly have a way with words. This poem is both heartbreaking and wonderful. The flow and rhythm are both perfect and the emotion drives it from the first line to the very last word. I like how you did some word play on it, too. I always feel like that can add to a piece. Great work!

[Mason]

At first, I thought it was a self-destructive relationship, but looking at it a second time, the word "rejection" makes it more obvious what you're trying to express. It's a horrific description, and it serves as a reminder of how emotionally devastating such a seemingly small thing is.

[Coyote Poetry]

Such power and great description in this poem. Sometime we can give everything and ain't ever enough. Your words told a story of blood and desire that will only increase with time. A outstanding poem.
Coyote