A Word to my Love

How a great love inspired my passion to come alive. It can be said with only simplicity.

 

 

My muse is you, the one who makes things bright

 

The one that makes life gleam

 

My muse is you, the one who makes things right

 

The one who made me see

Reviews

[blob blob]

romance and passion as a muse...:-)

"The one that makes life gleam"
...lovely...
"My muse is you, the one who makes things right"
..and even more lovely...
this is a gorgeous poem...:-)

J:)

[The Perfectionist]

Another short one! Ugh! Fine, fine...

Gleam is spelled incorrectly but unfortunately there's nothing else I can complain about. Just you wait until I have the time to read that mammoth chapter you posted. Then I'll show you...

[ChristianM]

As an artist myself I really enjoyed this.
This is often the feeling that runs through me as I find someone special to base my artwork on.
You've really portrayed that artist/muse connection. Great job

[heido]

I actually really like this.

Simplicity is lovely.
When done honestly.

You have accomplished this.