1=Two faces

1=Two faces

A Poem by CRZ

Get up, I'm exhausted. I'm extremely tired.
But so is this world
Sit down, You're fine.
But how about that overdue girl?

No one cares,  nobody
but then is hugs and kisses when you're known as somebody.
Only there, when you're beneficial 
they always want the best side of the stick.
But never rides when both sides aren't good
so they never stick.

So I admire the people who stuck around when
it was bad 
cause they maintained in my lane 
despite the light things I had.

But I always had one thing

'Cause success brings stress
therefore its the true assassin 

© 2013 CRZ

Author's Note

The first poem I wrote ever, couple months back lol

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Beware people. Only words are true.

Posted 4 Years Ago

not sure how I am with the title...but the words do u justice, very well

Posted 4 Years Ago

Deeply thought out and expressed, loved the last two lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I enjoyed reading this. I love poetry, but I've branched off just a bit and am now focusing on writing stories. Your poem is a great read!

Posted 4 Years Ago

"they always want the best side of the stick."- Everybody wants you at your best, but the truth is we all have many sides. Excellent point.

I feel like there's more to this, maybe expand in another poem?

Posted 4 Years Ago

Interesting I love it I think you have more to say though...but good piece

Posted 4 Years Ago

very powerful and straight to the point.
well done..

Posted 4 Years Ago

You always have the most interesting take on things! :) And, as usual, outstanding job getting your opinion across! :) I love reading your stuff! Keep up the good work! ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago

so true, i can relate. it's times when you're at your lowest point that people don't seem to care, but once you make a name for yourself suddenly everyone is your friend. Success comes with lots of hard work and passion is the driving force to it. lovely poem :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

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42 Reviews
Added on April 4, 2013
Last Updated on November 26, 2013



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