1=Two faces

Get up, I'm exhausted. I'm extremely tired.

But so is this world

Sit down, You're fine.

But how about that overdue girl?

No one cares,  nobody

but then is hugs and kisses when you're known as somebody.

Only there, when you're beneficial 

they always want the best side of the stick.

But never rides when both sides aren't good

so they never stick.

So I admire the people who stuck around when

it was bad 

cause they maintained in my lane 

despite the light things I had.

But I always had one thing

PASSION.

'Cause success brings stress

therefore its the true assassin 

Author's Note

The first poem I wrote ever, couple months back lol

Reviews

[Angel]

Beware people. Only words are true.

[gombeggar]

not sure how I am with the title...but the words do u justice, very well

[Eddie Davis]

Deeply thought out and expressed, loved the last two lines.

[Haley Harrigan]

I enjoyed reading this. I love poetry, but I've branched off just a bit and am now focusing on writing stories. Your poem is a great read!

[Diana]

"they always want the best side of the stick."- Everybody wants you at your best, but the truth is we all have many sides. Excellent point.

I feel like there's more to this, maybe expand in another poem?

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Interesting I love it I think you have more to say though...but good piece

[Riding the Rainbow]

very powerful and straight to the point.
well done..

[Calibaster]

You always have the most interesting take on things! :) And, as usual, outstanding job getting your opinion across! :) I love reading your stuff! Keep up the good work! ;)

[Leeci]

so true, i can relate. it's times when you're at your lowest point that people don't seem to care, but once you make a name for yourself suddenly everyone is your friend. Success comes with lots of hard work and passion is the driving force to it. lovely poem :)