1=Two faces

1=Two faces

A Poem by CRZ

Get up, I'm exhausted. I'm extremely tired.
But so is this world
Sit down, You're fine.
But how about that overdue girl?

No one cares,  nobody
but then is hugs and kisses when you're known as somebody.
Only there, when you're beneficial 
they always want the best side of the stick.
But never rides when both sides aren't good
so they never stick.

So I admire the people who stuck around when
it was bad 
cause they maintained in my lane 
despite the light things I had.

But I always had one thing

'Cause success brings stress
therefore its the true assassin 

© 2013 CRZ

Author's Note

The first poem I wrote ever, couple months back lol

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Passion + hard work = Success
But there would always be Stress in between. Nice concept you have in here.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Cause success brings stress
therefore its the true assassin

I love that line: one cause its so true!!! and two cause study assassins and murders sooo........it fits with me. The was nicely written I was a little confused on how they fit together but that's because I'ma dimwit, I'm sure its there I'm probably fuzzy in the head but still the pieces that were there were nicely written ^^

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on April 4, 2013
Last Updated on November 26, 2013



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