People Open Minds

People Open Minds

A Poem by CRZ

I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to 
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes

I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

Where we are aware of our differences 
where we take care of our misses and
no one disses
one another cause we are all human 
aka brothers

I like open minded people 
we rather share ideas 
help our peers 
and give advice to overcome
a certain vice and fear

I like open minded people 
cause that's when the doors of my soul
slowly opens 
I like open minded people and they like me back
well that's what I'm hoping

© 2013 CRZ



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open minds
open minds
been a while
HAI!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wonderful! I like how this was expressed and my favorite part would definitely have to be the second stanza :) I'm a pretty open-minded person, that's how I was raised and don't understand how I couldn't be since I was adopted into a family by a biracial couple. I have two siblings who are different ethnicities than myself and I am comfortable around the African American community. Other than that, I understand that no one has the same story and that others have been through many different things in their lives, some good while others are bad. We can't all be the same, but it would help the world if more people were open-minded and not judgemental. Too bad the people who run our government or political parties don't dare think of something as simple as this...and yes, every conversation with a person like this is never the same and that's the beauty of getting to know them.

Posted 3 Years Ago


We all like open-minded people...but we are all judgemental too...for example...I am judging the content of your writing by this review...what matters according to me is not to have preformed opinions... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


This was great :) I always love when I find people like this, who I can be myself around, and speak my opinion, and I know they won't judge! Good job with this one!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like them, too. Haha. It makes it easy to just be yourself, right? Without the fear of judging or being judged. This is very straightforward; speaks head on. I liked it. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


aren't they the best, well written. I starting to think of the people that make me smile who are beautifully open minded. Lovely read

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nice effective poem. Clear message and a very good one at that! Well done for this piece, I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nice write, great sentiment. Never know what conversation may be waiting, til you start.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a well written piece with an important message.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The repetition is very effective, and I like the colloquial tone. The meter gives it a kind of tap tap tap syncopation and I really like it. You can almost hear this one being spoken.

The last three stanzas are really effective. I like the substance of the first two, but they don't flow like the last three. if there was a way to set them all up using the same rhythm/meter I think that would take this poem up another notch.

Very good work, I love your voice, and the energy of your language. Keep it up.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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