People Open Minds

People Open Minds

A Poem by CRZ

I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to 
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes

I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

Where we are aware of our differences 
where we take care of our misses and
no one disses
one another cause we are all human 
aka brothers

I like open minded people 
we rather share ideas 
help our peers 
and give advice to overcome
a certain vice and fear

I like open minded people 
cause that's when the doors of my soul
slowly opens 
I like open minded people and they like me back
well that's what I'm hoping

© 2013 CRZ



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A poem that open minded people definitely look for. Thank you for writing this piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is a very good poem, I loved the theme as it rings so true. Though the only thing that needs to be worked on is punctuation (which by NO means am I the best at either, but there are quite a few obvious parts that could be cleaned up.) I also noticed some lines seemed a bit stilted and kinda interrupted the flow of the poem. But great work!! Keep it up!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great work! The world can surely do with more open minded people. Your last verse rings so true. It's impossible to open the doors of your soul to a narrow minded man. Thanks CRZ.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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This is my first attempt at slam poetry, and I'm excited to film a performance of this piece over the coming day.
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the open minded people can open the minds of others too, good theme expressed here, well done
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Posted 3 Years Ago


This was excellent. There aren't enough open minded people making this world go round,just the yes men!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like open minded people to and im pretty sure i am also one, for i am also easy to talk to, and i try to never judge anyone :)
I like the meaning to this piece, and it was very well written.
Great write :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


u have some really good lines in here...yer punctuation and caps need 2 be cleaned up

Posted 3 Years Ago


Last stanza is a corker :)
Yes...it does open doors to be open and likewise to connect with open minded souls...
Holding hands is far better than balancing judgement x

Posted 3 Years Ago


I'm an open-minded person, and I can tell you, I like you back! Not as in wanting to date you, but as a friend and a fellow open-minder (just made that word up). I honestly enjoyed this poem, and I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one who feels this way. There aren't many open-minded people in my school, so I felt as if, for the first time this semester (and at home/on the Internet), that I wasn't alone. Just like you are not alone. And together, we'll brave this storm.

Posted 3 Years Ago


True True True....tolerance is important, you have expressed this very well here !

Posted 3 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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