People Open Minds

People Open Minds

A Poem by CRZ

I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to 
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes

I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

Where we are aware of our differences 
where we take care of our misses and
no one disses
one another cause we are all human 
aka brothers

I like open minded people 
we rather share ideas 
help our peers 
and give advice to overcome
a certain vice and fear

I like open minded people 
cause that's when the doors of my soul
slowly opens 
I like open minded people and they like me back
well that's what I'm hoping

© 2013 CRZ


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I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
..these lines stole my heart

Posted 10 Years Ago


A liberal nature opens up many opportunities ... to air things that we would have hidden inside. Where such liberal natures come from environments outside our immediate homes ... we create an appreciation for such values ... and we hope to grow with it someday. Nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


People tend to mean different things by 'open mind'. Having an open mind is good...having no standards of your own, not so much...



Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a good write and good topic. xo Winter

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like open minded people. They r just lyk u CRZ. Very nyc write. Thnx 4 sharing..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very cool rhyme scheme. It kind of snuck up on me there and my brain was like 'Oh!, hello there!' lol
Great read and a great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You did a really good job on this poem. The writing style has a nice rhythm, the repetition of "I like open minded people" keeps the reader focused and the sentiments in each stanza are easy to relate to. I love the line "when the doors of my soul slowly open" - another poem in the making right there ! Great writing CRZ. Justine

Posted 10 Years Ago


straight forward and brilliant :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the reference at the end of the first stanza- "let he who is not guilty of sin cast the first stone"- yet people judge even when they are far from saintly themselves.

my favorite stanza, though, is the third. I just have one question- taking care of our misses? I'm not entirely sure what you mean by that.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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