People Open Minds

People Open Minds

A Poem by CRZ

I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to 
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes

I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

Where we are aware of our differences 
where we take care of our misses and
no one disses
one another cause we are all human 
aka brothers

I like open minded people 
we rather share ideas 
help our peers 
and give advice to overcome
a certain vice and fear

I like open minded people 
cause that's when the doors of my soul
slowly opens 
I like open minded people and they like me back
well that's what I'm hoping

© 2013 CRZ


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A very direct poem. Gets its point across without being judgmental, which is, I am sure exactly what you intended.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like open minded people too! - much easier to talk to and no one likes to feel judged.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'd rather like to think that I'm open minded, ... but I doubt it. :) ;) I do like people that are willing to hear your side of the story, with no interruptions or criticism. Nice job! ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like openminded people too!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is amazing, I love the message behind it and I can relate to this very much. very well done kido

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yet, I am searching for an open minded age mate....... I really liked this poem of yours.....its a perfect criteria of how an open minded person shud be.... well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


"And not get judged or criticized/through sinners eyes" Right off the bat you give me a great line! Love it.
"well that's what I'm hoping" Wow, I love the vulnerability that is shown in that last line. It's great a fear that we all have, not to be liked by the people we like.
Beautiful peace, to me it's more about wanted to find acceptance in friends and in society than it is about just talking to interesting people. It really is brought home by the fact you want them to like you back so I think you're really talking about friendship here. Great job, really great lines. I love it, perfect :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


a touching and open minded write, liked it and yes what you say is true
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

liked the write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked your idea that every conversation with open minded people feels like a sequel. You have an admiral expression to your voice. In the second to last line, you don't need the 's' on "opens". Peace

Posted 10 Years Ago


last phrase's ended with the great ending and first phrase started with a great starting...you dropped here what you see, what you;ve seen in your life in dif..diff. points of views..'..
nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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