Life as of now

Life itself is just abstract 

You have to leave the past but refer back 

to keep intact 

Every day you gain a few pieces 

to enhance your body , soul and thesis 

Seems like there's more downs than ups 

but it makes you the person you want to be

you can either indulge what this world offers 

or be your own coach , your own shot caller 

We learn such emotions like love & grief

Pain and love, Mud and glass.

Like the time I got hurt years back 

Oh man, there I go referring to the past  

I have to learn from the past 

but also burn away from my past

The future is always on its way 

so I won't be worried with that

I need to worry about right now 

because it won't come back 

Reviews

[smilempsn]

hmm.. thought provoking.....

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Well done! The message is very obvious- focus on the present because what's done is done and what will come will come. The present indeed is most in our control.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Well done! The message is very obvious- focus on the present because what's done is done and what will come will come. The present indeed is most in our control.

[Vikrantsingh]

Very well narrated and very well expressed my friend CRZ :)
Thanks for sharing :)

- Singh
Cheers!

[Kleio13]

"Every day you gain a few pieces
to enhance your body , soul and thesis " i love these lines although i feel like you have more to say in this poem that you didn't deliver. the theme is sokmething that everyone can relate to. Nice piece

[Pyyro]

Time to say it was again well done here. It is so very true what everyone must go through, and decide upon their path to take.

[Baban.A.A]

well done. this was one of the best pieces. you used more literery rhythem which I liked most, you are much better in this piece than others. I assume it is because the points were very clear or maybe the style so fresh, but what I know is that I liked it. best luck

[gombeggar]

the rhyme reads very forced...since u probably meant it so 2 be that way that would explain the drum beat it follows in reading

[Leigh]

Learn from the past, but don't let it haunt you is the message I get

[Perkele.7885]

The past is a tool! It helps with our understanding of today and any preparations that we can utilize in making our tomorrows more palatable! All part of each of us as a work in progress!