Bliss

Bliss

A Poem by CRZ

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 
People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.
Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location
Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 
The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.
We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.
Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.
No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche
but 
damn that was a good day.

© 2013 CRZ



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Its good for once in a while to forget all the worries of the world & to get lost in the music, to enjoy for sometime. Do the things which you like doing for life is too short to regret it later.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I am thinking loud! Me personally, I am looking for a quieter place. But, I can dig the scene and how it is all going down. Boys and girls, all on the same page, joy and laughter and music all around. As you say; a damn fine day, no cliche'! And a good write telling me all about it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Thanks for posting this CRZ - it transported me to a rave circa 1990 where Catholics and Protestants in Belfast danced together and hugged and laughed without judgement. It was sublime.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Best feeling in the world, captured in this piece. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


This makes me think of a concert, club or party, where the music is blasting and everyone is having a good time. There is nothing else to worry about but the heightened joy of dancing and music. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I liked this piece very much. I liked how you have the rhyme. To me this sounds like a party or something like that. Nicely done

Posted 3 Years Ago


I get the feeling of an all out party here, probably with drinking. Props for making it rhyme. My favorite line, “We were all united as one for the night.” Short as it was, I think you got your point, or the essence you intended, across


Posted 3 Years Ago


good days
nice to get those
and you didn't have saki, eh?
amazing
HAI!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


And a good day, indeed, that you translate into words. I almost hear the music. And somehow, the flow of this poem of yours felt like a rap song. Haha. But it's good. Nicely written. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


nice simple honest piece. reminds me of a club scene

Posted 3 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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