Bliss

Bliss

A Poem by CRZ

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 
People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.
Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location
Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 
The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.
We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.
Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.
No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche
but 
damn that was a good day.

© 2013 CRZ



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Felt the happiness you were radiating through this piece.

best wishes


Posted 3 Years Ago


I can feel the energy of the room released. Wonderful sensation. Everyone wants that moment where they feel its the perfect moment. Well done. Great line, "no one could hold it."

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dance club euphoria. The inimitable fusion of the crowd into one, pulsating mass. You've expressed beautifully the exhilaration of being one with the music. Excellent poem :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


I can definitely relate to this piece. As a mater of fact, most people should! Good jon!

Posted 3 Years Ago


this was awesome very nice job kido

Posted 3 Years Ago


People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.
Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

you have won my heart with these lines. 100/100 :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great work on this poem! Great music transcends.

Posted 3 Years Ago


There was so much peace and tranquility in this poem. I really liked it. Thank you for requesting me to read it, CRZ. :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


Haha...that sounds incredible. This is very great piece of poem I just loved it. Made my mind refreshed. Thanks a bunch.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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