Bliss

Bliss

A Poem by CRZ

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 
People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.
Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location
Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 
The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.
We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.
Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.
No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche
but 
damn that was a good day.

© 2013 CRZ



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Marvelous, what I'd do for such a day.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I bet it was a good day. Okay of a read, keep it up

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like the feeling that this gives me. Reminds me of the one type of moment that made the nights of consistent weekend parties worth it. Way to capture.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love this poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Im here for the party! haha cool write! I loved it, the sounds of the party and the bas of the music. Great write
-Dragon

Posted 4 Years Ago


There is bliss in the listening and dancing to good music. More people the better. I like the positive energy in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love how you reflect happiness and how the essence of it can be found in many different places, within ourselves, from another person or even from a passion, great job!! :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is how I feel when I put on my earphones and blast my music into my ears. Everything else is on pause. Fun read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I think your title should be--Party Bliss--just a suggestion. A good read, but a little disjointed at times for me. Maybe, that is what you intended?
The ending stanza seems to sum it all up rather soon, but in a good way.
You have caught the feelings and moods of party life or a night on the town to relief stress.
Thanks for the pleasure to read and review ~ keep writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Everything is connected ... and then to the mind. Nice write.

Posted 4 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1167 Views
63 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on June 2, 2013
Last Updated on June 2, 2013

Author

CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



About
Poet & Artist Thou shall not rest until I make my whole fam rich more..

Writing
next stop next stop

A Poem by CRZ



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Luna Luna

A Poem by Sami Khalil