soul session

soul session

A Poem by CRZ

I am feeling great...

I don't feel any problems lingering on me. No strings of frustrations tied on my phone cord.

I can walk and talk with no arguments , bitterness or worries. Just conversations with bliss, I really missed this sensation of silence and peace in my soul.
            It's just surrounding my soul , soothing it with ideas and knowledge and integrity.

Whenever I get around this thing or working on it or creating new ideas. Nothing else in this world seems to matter.
Surroundings are either a blur or inspiration to keep on advancing.


Look here friend, this isn't a love poem or maybe it is.
                         It's whatever you want.
It can be about music, family, cake, sports, fixing cars ... I don't know.

I just absorb joy , happiness & bliss. My mind is just around with positive thoughts and how to improve myself. 

The world is not how I thought it would be when I was just a little kid. "Eff it" is what Life told me & I was like "eff the negative" , I gotta transcend through this.

Anything that you have a passion for , just keep on doing and improve as a human being. The only thing that last forever is love and soul. Everything is just an earthly thing. 


See, this is just not a poem on a website or anything. These are words coming from the heart, no bs. Expressing how something you love can keep you motivated and keep you on the right track in this life. 

© 2013 CRZ


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i think if the world could even slightly understand and accept what you've written here, the world would be a better place overnight and people would try to improve rather than continue the calamity. words like these remind us of our latent greatness and happiness. glad you found yours.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"Eff the negative, I gotta transcend through this." My favorite part. This is a really lovely piece, both philosophical and conversational. :) Awesome work, keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i think if the world could even slightly understand and accept what you've written here, the world would be a better place overnight and people would try to improve rather than continue the calamity. words like these remind us of our latent greatness and happiness. glad you found yours.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the message here, and the conversational flow of your poetry. Very nicely penned:)

Lisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this :) love the signature style, use it often! 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love the positive message here, Jason. Transcending through the negative is a wonderful way to "let things go". Great job here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A positive message delivered in a matter of fact way. I like the tone of the poem, it feels very conversational. i agree with other reviwers, this would be an excellant spoken word piece.

good words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Anything that you have a passion for , just keep on doing and improve as a human being. The only thing that last forever is love and soul. Everything is just an earthly thing.

for sure its a soul session which will certainly motivate the reader.

Best Wishes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really liked this one, very deep.

Posted 10 Years Ago


More people need to remember this. Great piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"The world is not how I thought it would be when I was just a little kid. 'Eff it' is what Life told me & I was like 'eff the negative' , I gotta transcend through this."

Really enjoyed this line. So true, and something most of us can relate to.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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