I am

I am

A Poem by CRZ

She stands there. Thinking , wishing , hoping. Now she knows.


The man stands in front of her. A robust cunning smile towards her.


She, strong as a lion chewing its prey, her heart pounding, voice quivering. Shouts!













"I am the one"

© 2014 CRZ

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wow i expected something else ...and it turned something else...its amazing...and simple..no more words no less words..just perfect..the way it is

Posted 3 Weeks Ago

She realizes her potential as an offensive and wary equal to the man with the cunning smile! Shouts
"Bring it on!'

Posted 3 Years Ago

With very simple words, with minimal efforts, you expressed a great deal in this write. I enjoyed it. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

no words just... *0* amazing as usual :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

You created such contrast in so few lines and allowed the power of using minimal words to guide the reader in so many different directions. I love this poem's ambiguity and boldness, pure genius!

Posted 4 Years Ago

There is something to be said about theability of saying a lot with very little. You did it here! Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago

Intense with an ending of misdirection. This painted a dark scene at the beginning and now I'm contemplating the final line.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Hmm above my head..........But I was here :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago

hmmm this was interesting,
not at all what I expected when I clicked on the title ^^
I love how choppy this poem is, it adds intensity
wonderful job :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

Hmm, there's power in brevity. :) Well written, CRZ!

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on February 24, 2014
Last Updated on February 24, 2014



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