I am

I am

A Poem by CRZ

She stands there. Thinking , wishing , hoping. Now she knows.

 

The man stands in front of her. A robust cunning smile towards her.

 

She, strong as a lion chewing its prey, her heart pounding, voice quivering. Shouts!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I am the one"


© 2014 CRZ



WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
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She realizes her potential as an offensive and wary equal to the man with the cunning smile! Shouts
"Bring it on!'

Posted 2 Years Ago


With very simple words, with minimal efforts, you expressed a great deal in this write. I enjoyed it. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


no words just... *0* amazing as usual :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


You created such contrast in so few lines and allowed the power of using minimal words to guide the reader in so many different directions. I love this poem's ambiguity and boldness, pure genius!

Posted 3 Years Ago


There is something to be said about theability of saying a lot with very little. You did it here! Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Intense with an ending of misdirection. This painted a dark scene at the beginning and now I'm contemplating the final line.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hmm above my head..........But I was here :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


hmmm this was interesting,
not at all what I expected when I clicked on the title ^^
I love how choppy this poem is, it adds intensity
wonderful job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hmm, there's power in brevity. :) Well written, CRZ!

Posted 3 Years Ago


reads more like a scene in a story but whatever it's still good, well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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