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A Poem by CRZ

Live as today your breath expires 

 

But learn to maintain an everlasting fire 




The fire will galvanize people, tribes to create stories 

& share them to others. 

Leave this earth gracefully as yourself 

Guide those by your own trials & errors. 


 

 

Your knowledge and courage won't be forgotten and lying with the dust


© 2014 CRZ



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This is short witty saying. The last two lines struck me.

Posted 3 Years Ago


The opening lines are truly inspirational. I love it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


we should not only leave a legacy but live one as well. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nice.
great message and an interesting write.
i liked it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very good poem. It is written in such a way that it can be implied multiple different ways and all of them make sense. I intterpruted it as live a life worth remembering. It flowed very well and your word choice was excelent. It was just overall a fantastic read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nice piece. Wise. Live and enjoy life for it passes, only a legacy can be left behind in the end. That's what how I understand this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is wonderful! I love how you changed both font sizes and styles in this piece. Although the last line is the smallest, and visually the least noticeable- it is in my opinion- the most powerful line in the piece.
Great write!
Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


I am completely with you, we should all leave this earth gracefully as ourselves. Good little write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Powerful message. I like it.


Posted 3 Years Ago


A powerful message, very well done. To be able to leave a legacy is to have lived and inspired.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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