LIVE

LIVE

A Poem by CRZ

Live as today your breath expires 

 

But learn to maintain an everlasting fire 




The fire will galvanize people, tribes to create stories 

& share them to others. 

Leave this earth gracefully as yourself 

Guide those by your own trials & errors. 


 

 

Your knowledge and courage won't be forgotten and lying with the dust

© 2014 CRZ


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Fantastic...whatever our trials and errors or blessings and happiness, we owe it to ourselves and humanity to set an example - care and give love, treat others as we would like to be treated ourselves so we leave this plain with a good heart and compassion... loved this x

Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting piece,
I like the opener because in a way our breath does expire every day and it is what was done with the day that will determine if it stokes a fire that lives on. nice work.
Chris

Posted 9 Years Ago


well said (y) truly we have to live our lives and not waste any minute of them ;) wonderful words and a beautiful piece love it ;)


Posted 9 Years Ago


Great and thought provoking write, so true , enjoyed

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thought provoking and very inspirational write.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow. This is so true. I'd take the advice now, but I think I'll wait for summer! ;) Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very true .Live your life to the fullest but in a way that the legacy you leave behind will be a proud one :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A challenge to all who live only for the worldly and the temporal!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wisdom packed in a good poem..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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