Two stars under one

Under the sun
Having some fun
Ray that shines
Light that blinds
Warmth to touch
Caress too much
Moan out loud
Forget the crowd
Laugh a little
Whisper a riddle
Teasing my kiss
Tongues meet bliss
Lost in you
Love so true

Reviews

[millennial leo]

Sounds a little more like lust than love... but I like this poem. It reads very well and easy

[JacobMarloe]

I suppose as a simple man I find the two to be inextricably linked and as such have never been successful at discerning the difference between them. Perhaps that's why I am such a lousy date hadn't really looked at that way before. Thanks for the review.

[millennial leo]

I understand that! Nevertheless, a good poem!

[Sami Khalil]

A good rhyming poem. Short and sweet. Thank you for sharing.

[JacobMarloe]

Thank you.