The Journey

 

“THE JOURNEY”

BY: M. View

 

New out look on life comes at many different times

In the 8th grade of School I learned how to rhyme

New to the cats that know me real well

Work real hard to stay off those reels

The one that destroys from inside to out

That why I try to watch what comes out my mouth

Real messages real story real life in fact

I hold on punches throw nothing but the axe

Had to break away from so called friends

Only those who are true comes back before the end

A student of life that’s what I’m

That’s bewildered by the evil of men

The sciences of deception

And the art on corruption

Is toxic if you take it wrong

Many young people have taken it wrong

Destroying their nature

Encaging them in their own mind

Leaving their freedom all behind

I use to be there I took that route

Luckily I found a slim way out

And Took time to start my own house

It was not easy on those cloudy days

Sip the herbals of life to get me out of the hays

Walked the path and felt like I was all alone

Looked behind to see my foot prints were gone

Remembering things said from days gone by

Pass the wisdom along before you die

Must be part of the phenomenon to stop the letter

Willy had that thing will put together

My journey of life is eyes wide open and coping

This letter for thoughts who’s noise is wide open.

 

Reviews

[Nish Nish the Fish]

This is astounding to the core! Really!
I can imagine this as a rap, u know, nice beat, just kinda "singing" the words how u want them to be heard.
This wud go perfectly with slam poetry!
This is great, really, its so thought provoking and inspiring!
it makes me wanna write one myself :)
it's so unique, yet it portrays the aspects of many ppls lives.
nice word choice!
Destroying their nature
Encaging them in their own mind ===very powerful!
Great Read ;)

[Lady V]

When we learn to be alone is when we accomplish all things. It is a great feeling to do great things with the help of others but it is even better when one can do it on their own. That was a lesson and a half for me. It is great to have people around but you need to be able to stand on your own if and or when they leave.

Great piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Good write. I like the message of a life and lessons learned!