A Weird Change

Our friendship is beautiful, 

Our friendship is deep

Our friendship is something 

Close to my heart, I keep

But you've changed, 

And its so different now

You don't even look at me

And I wonder how

We used to talk so much,

So much, we had fun

And I didn't even notice

When our friendship was done

And I don't know why, 

But I hate what is happening

And only when you talk to me,

Will you end this suffering

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

it is so frustrating when those close to us change and distance themselves. You captured that well in this.

[Shia]

Nicely expressed raw emotion!

[Abbie]

excellent poem as always rhea! The rhyme was great, the flow was great, overall, wonderful! keep writing! :D
p.s.- I think I understand now! XD lol

[Rhea]

told you!

[Abbie]

XD

[deepblue04]

Oh gosh, I feel sorry for you. And I totally understand how you feel! one of my guy friends has changed so much, I don't even text him anymore! I love it and Good job!

[Rhea]

i know.. but we cleared it out and all.. so its fine now. And he's a boarder in school, so I really can't 'text' him.. phones not allowed...

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard when we feel there is separation between our good friends. I like the hope and desire for the friendship to renew. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[AK]

Nice poem:) I can't really relate to this one(I'm still quite awkward with guys if you get what I mean) but your feelings are very well expressed. I loved it! Keep writing! And I hope things will get better for the two of you:)

[Rhea]

yes AK, I totally get what you mean...

[Rhea]

and thank you, everything's okay now!

[AK]

I'm glad it is! :)

[Serenity Faith]

I think many, many people can relate to this. I know I most certainly can. I certainly hope things right themselves with you and your friend. Maybe you could show him this poem? It's very well written, and I love the picture, tre cute ^_^

[Balkaran Singh Sidhu]

awesome piece....nice rhyming too....keep up the good work

[Tai]

Two companions drifting apart is a painful thing to watch, let alone experience. I do hope things go well between you two, but if not, just let the cards play themselves.

[Rhea]

thank you Ryan. And yes, its all okay now... we cleared it out.