Twilight

Twilight

A Poem by Aehr

As the sun descends gracefully
And leaves some light to linger
And twilight comes slowly
Like a slipping ring on a finger

The sky attracts my soul
Towards the dimming light
And I am forced to wonder
And admire this beautiful sight

The clouds and the amazing sky
A beautiful contrast I see
The wind is going wild and
It's fast and wild and free

The bats flying overhead
The magic of birds' song
And I just smile because I know
This enchanting place is where I belong

© 2012 Aehr


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Author's Note

Aehr
The twilight sky is undeniably beautiful.
And today, as I gazed up at the enormous and purplish-blue sky, it inspired me to write this poem. Because, we should be happy that we belong to such beautiful place, and we should value it. This poem was inspired by the twilight sky, so I've kept the name of the poem 'Twilight'. I'm dying to see your reviews for this one!!!

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I totally love this! It's thought-provoking, it's unusual, and the imagery is just amazing. The words fit in together like puzzle pieces. The flow is stellar, and the rhyme scheme was selected perfectly for this topic. It makes me feel like I'm looking at the twilight sky as I read this. Undeniably perfect, Rhea. It's superb, it's beautiful, it's well-written, it's going in my library. Rating 100/100.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aehr

11 Years Ago

aww.. thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!
A. V. Madison

11 Years Ago

Anytime.



Reviews

A beautiful description. Create a good place and vision. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow, this is really elegant. I like that. Comparing all those things to twilight makes it very beautiful... Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful......

Posted 11 Years Ago


You expressed this beautifully good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, I absolutely love this!!! So captivating.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wooow....its phenomenal...very sweet..exciting..cheerful...profound...intense...its like a dreamy state..very well done...i loved this poem..very nicely described the whole thing..:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


there have been hundreds of poems written abot the sky, my favorites are about the night sky....i love this one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow beautiful ....i love it

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 31, 2012
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