The Silent Tear

The Silent Tear

A Poem by Aehr

As the leaves rustled through the wind

I walked down to the lane,

With a heart full of sadness

Memories full of pain.

 

Thoughts that distracted me

Bad memories of the past,

Now with a silent tear

I wish no memory lasts.

 

The way I fell down

After thinking so high,

The way all my dreams crashed

That just makes me cry.

 

My dreams are all broken

All shattered like glass,

I don’t want to recall

The memories of the past.

 

Here I go again

Through the same lane,

With a heart full of sadness

Memories full of pain.

© 2012 Aehr


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emotional write....good use of rhymes


Posted 11 Years Ago


this is nice and emotional, me gusta :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awwww...touched my heart..and i loved it..marvellous..i love such poems..very nicely described the repition of feelings..the misery loneliness..very well described..:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hmmm, what if, the leaves rustled the wind?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hard to escape memory and pain. I believe we must learn to live with it. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like that you repeated yourself, it makes it feel more serious, more, on going.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. really got me into your words. was touched. Amazing yet sad poem :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


The repetition of the last two lines of the first stanza at the end was clever and completed the piece very nicely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Flawless conceptually. One subject-verb agreement issue in the third stanza, last line. Nice poem! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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