Love of Tea

My Love Like Tea

I poured it out

into your cup

to fill your heart

with love

and love you forever

Author's Note

What do you think????
Do you think it's emotional enough? Cause for myself I hardly feel anything from this poem.. So, tell me what do you think.... Maybe I should delete it... Should I?

Reviews

[M.A. Van Dyke]

the only thing i could say is that when i don't drink my tea quick enough, it gets cold...
i like what you have so far, but it seems unfinished. that is not a bad thing, it just leaves me wanting more. your idea is there, your talent is there, i just want to see where it goes from there!

[Fontane Wong]

What a very sweet poem! I can almost see how you feel our heart like a tea. Simple but sweet poem. Good write!

[Rhonda]

very simple poem, but it's amazing :D

[Dalebear]

This is simple but sweet poem
Very nicely done

Keep writing

Dalebear

[Aven]

I can picture a scene of two lovers drinking herbal tea in a chinese teahouse, her hand touches his, their eyes meet and sparks fly! a very sweet, loving, metaphore. :)

[Kimberly]

I think this one is your best, actually. Emotion and power should come subtly like this one.

[Marie Harrison]

What a precious poem. I love it!

[Invisible Ink]

this is a great poem... but the beginning is much stronger than the end and i love more imagery... the taste, smell, power, color of tea? maybe something like, "you sipped it and...

[DrSprinkz73]

Hmm maybe if you spoke of the last drop... ?
This is wonderful though please don't delete,you don't really want to delete it :)

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[YYPSNicoletse]

It was toooooooooooooooooooo short cyn. I think you need to add more things to this poem to make it longer and have more emotion. Good job.