Cry Out All I Have

Burst into tears

you finally tell me

you hate me

my heart twist with pain

but your love

no matter how

I can't get back anymore

I don't know what should I say

I only want to cry

to cry out

my sadness

and leave nothing

in my body

cause I know

all I have is

Pain

and

No

More

Author's Note

Is this too short???
What do you think?
Please Review

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

No the poem isn't too short, the shortness fits in, don't ask me how, I don't know, I just think so :P
The poem is filled with emotions and a very heartfelt one as well.
Great job and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

[Rhonda]

very good poem :)

[Dalebear]

I like this poem so...... heartfelt and touching moving poem.

Keep up the writing

[Aven]

I am pro-short poetry, I write very short poems myself. stay true! :)

[Kimberly]

No poem can be too short. This is good and hearfelt and heartfelt should be brief.

[No regret]

i liked this ,,, i came to read it again ..

[Sweets]

Short and sweet.
Kinda sad, but nice

[No regret]

very nice ..tc

[SimplyDisastrous]

By "my hear twist with pain" I think you mean "My heart twisted with pain"

You should probably fix that. I can see that the people below me are very confused about that line. But, otherwise, I can relate to this poem. Alot. Good job, Cyn.As always.

[lavina k.]

Nopes its more enough to describe what you are going through with all you felt..
Nice write!!!!
Keep writing!!!!