Is This A End?

Is This The End?


Is This the end?
Or this is the start?
do you love me?
or we are broken?
why can't you tell
what do you think?
What do you feel with me?
Why do you always cover your feeling?
Do you still care me?
Or this is the end?

Author's Note

I personally don't like this poem, this whole bunch or Qs. but still, I've to write it, what do u think?

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

i like this

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I like it, I understand the feeling behind all of it. I've gone through that feeling. Maybe, you should read it over make a few corrections. Yeah it's really really good.

[Short.Nerd]

You have a few mistakes you need to fix but other than that it is good.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I think this is an awesome poem to which we all can relate to!

[Dalebear]

I like this poem, it is questions that come from the heart.

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

I like the idea of a poem with no answered questions only one question after the other. Maybe restructuring it so that it's not just different questions one right after the other would make it better.

[Miss Coral]

I like this; usually, poems that are all questions really bother me, but this was nicely done. You really captured a great feeling of finality- nice job. :)

-Coral-

[lavina k.]

I didn't get the point when you don't like then how can you put these questions to yourself....well i can relate to these and have got the idea with what thoughts these questions are being put up....
nice try!!!!

[Rain Kissed Secret]

"Or we are broken?" should be "Or are we broken?" "Or this is the end?" would sound better if it were "Or is this the end?" I would go over this honey, we can tell as your readers that you don't care about this poem, and if you don't care about it, then maybe you shouldn't of posted it..? It's yours to mold however you'd like, so have fun with it :)

[Fontane Wong]

Sometimes I would also have some kind of questions. But I get no answer at last. Life twits and falls. I think I should keep on asking this quesion to get a answer. I love this poem that are centered around the questions. This make the reader gets to think the answer. Writing keeps our wondering alive! I love this poem, thanks for posing such a nice poem.