Forever We Have (2)

Forever We Have (2)

A Story by Cynthia

I and Seth was a item, forever, and yet, I can't help myself to smile and laugh! What will I want except Seth? Nothing. I can tell you, no one will be as lucky as me, having a perfect boyfriend who will always on my side, who always love me, and awwww!

I am lucky cause I am in love with the right person, Seth. I am lucky cause I can be cared by the person I care as well, Seth. I am lucky cause I can be a part of the most important person in my life, Seth. Yes, Seth, Seth and Seth! I can't think of anyone else besides him!

I remembered the night I refused him, and that surly test out he really do loves me, cause he could wait. Don't get myself wrong, that night don't mean a test, it's a reason why I love him more than ever! It has been two days since that lovely night...... And memories never fade out me......

Seth called out " Betty! Are you going to lunch or not?!" I laughed " Yup, coming!" As I went downstairs. Yes, our first lunch date, I have never known what to do in a lunch date, but I believe, with Seth here, everything will work perfectly.

Seth words swing in my head ' forever we have', yes he swore we have forever, and it's real.
yes, forever, everything I have dream of.

© 2011 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
since some people said I should write on, so, there it is, my second part

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this was nice work, and i'm glad that you've built on constructive criticism, now that is the way forward to success. i sure like this one, but i have to agree, you can make this a little less stiff. the way to do this basically is to keep writing until you can establish a natural flow in English, and then correct your past work.
nice work here!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked it, good job

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i like it! :) good job!!

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Great job! I'm loving this story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute write.

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Nice

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Nice continuation.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yay you continued it :D It's still good :) and still cute XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


really, but why do you hate it?

Posted 13 Years Ago


i hate it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this was nice work, and i'm glad that you've built on constructive criticism, now that is the way forward to success. i sure like this one, but i have to agree, you can make this a little less stiff. the way to do this basically is to keep writing until you can establish a natural flow in English, and then correct your past work.
nice work here!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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