Military Daughter

Military Daughter

A Poem by Kadessa (Kaddy)
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This was hard to write, remembering all the times without him. Hope you all like it. XD

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I am a militery daughter

I wonder if he knows he is my HERO

I hear my mom cry alone

I see her try to hide her sorrow

 

I am a militery daughter

I pretend everything is fine

I feel lonely without my Dad here

I touch pictures of him and

I worry for his safty

I cry when there are those special moments he misses

 

I am a militery daughter

I understand he is protecting our country

I say he will be home soon

I dream of the day we are reunited

I try to be strong for my mother, my brother, and my sister

I hope we never find men in uniform at our door

I am a military daughter

© 2012 Kadessa (Kaddy)


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A very sad poem. I hope no child have to learn of a father or mother death. You wrote on a sad subject. War take from our world and the people we are fighting against. A powerful poem. If it is true. I hope you send the poem to your father. He would be proud of you. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Yes, it is true. My dad is safe at home right now but gets orders to a ship soon. Hoping he wont be .. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

I was a Soldier for 15 years. Leaving your family is very hard. I hope he had a short tour.



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I love this. I'm a military daughter also


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rose

11 Years Ago

I was basically raised to not show emotion which led people to think I'm heartless and that really h.. read more
Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Ikr people tell me that all the time.
They also wonder why I don't like to open up and tell al.. read more
Rose

11 Years Ago

It's just how we were raised
Kadessa... This, is a wonderful, poignant and very well written poem. I don't know if it's about something in your real life or not. You have captured a little of the heart of every military daughter with this and the world is better for it. Thank you.

Ufi


Posted 11 Years Ago


Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

thank! i love getting reviews.
yes, i am a military daughter and i am proud of the fact. i jus.. read more
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

11 Years Ago

I know how it is... I really do. Hang in there. He'll be back before you know it.
Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

thx, i can use the support
A very sad poem. I hope no child have to learn of a father or mother death. You wrote on a sad subject. War take from our world and the people we are fighting against. A powerful poem. If it is true. I hope you send the poem to your father. He would be proud of you. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Yes, it is true. My dad is safe at home right now but gets orders to a ship soon. Hoping he wont be .. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

I was a Soldier for 15 years. Leaving your family is very hard. I hope he had a short tour.
This is a very well written poem. I understand these feeling as my dad is retired from 27 years of service and I, a father of soon to be 3, am serving too. Thank you for your poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Ya, my dad is in his last few years of surving. And thanks for surfing our country
Walker Andreasen

11 Years Ago

Not at all! I'm glad I can.
This is very well written and very heartfelt. I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oops I did spell military wrong..... I am a horrible speller

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well done. I've never had anyone close to me overseas so I can't even imagine. Your thoughts and emotions were conveyed well. The only critique I can give you is to fix up where you misspelled 'military' a few times. Otherwise, great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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