Melt Down

For the ones who are sad or lost. Don't give up!

Life's Offer is something beautiful what you'll get

Live as your gonna die tomorrow, 

Don't waste your time only at being sad !

 

A lot of people who will follow you at your Path

Take their opinions, listen to what they have to say

Friends are the most beautiful flowers a long the way

They can dry your tears even when you are very sad

 

So you can build a bridge from your side to mine

And when you are lonely or when you are Lost

Don't forget, there is always enough Sunshine

We both can be fine

 

And when you are loneley or feeling Lost

There's enough Love and Warmth so

We can melt down the entire cold from Winters Frost.

Author's Note

you like it? I hope so :)

Reviews

[Octavious]

I enjoyed this, but based on the other poems that I have read this isn't my favorite of you works, but still enjoyable. This poem had a lot of sentimental value, but I don't think that this poem made it to it's highest peak of power; over all good job though.

[Lubna]

A very good poem. I like it because we think alike, I also believe that instead of being sad we can find hope in what we already have.

[CoffeePoet]

again I agree with you;)

[Nene]

amazing write!!!!! you are right there is enough warmth, and love everywhere.... All of us will get what we diserve we just have to keep fighting and trying and stand up after every fall

[CoffeePoet]

yes I agree ! after the hardest falls there are sometimes the greatest stand ups :)

[Nene]

yeuuppp!!!! Beautifuly said!!!