Your Smile

Your Smile

A Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir
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For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

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Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith

Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir


© 2015 Abderrahmane Dakir



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One must have the will power to live, to survive in the growing cruel world, yet still can and ;possess the ultimate power(love). thanks for sharing the wonderful poem.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


loved the flow of this - good writing

Posted 2 Months Ago


Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
SUCH SOOTHING LINES DEAR, WOW!!

Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
brave, poised, confident and beautiful.
what an awesome creation


Posted 7 Months Ago


amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 1 Year Ago


What a lovely poem ....inspiring all of us

Posted 1 Year Ago


I've read rhymes in great poems, but this was terrific; totally loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


wow ... this is beautiful ....you really are an amazing writer !!!!! 100% ratings from me

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is beautiful i really enjoyed it

Posted 1 Year Ago


This poem made me SMILE--although I don't know WHAT you'd say in a poem about it--very fine poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.
A smile is a curve that sets everything straight .....nice lines ...keep it up

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.

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Added on April 30, 2015
Last Updated on June 15, 2015
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Abderrahmane Dakir
Abderrahmane Dakir

casablanca, Morocco



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