Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Prashant Pandey]

Rhythmic. Was a good read :-)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Rene Velez]

Very good..."efficiently do my best" is the correct way.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[cycy]

this is a great poem indeed and i can simply just imagine what a smile with the power to acheive so much must look like,well penned dear keep it up hey xo

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Cycy.

[R Smith]

a smile that wins every battle and gives you strength on the road ahead, a remarkably erudite poem Abderrahmane Dakir, very well done :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank so much Richard Allen Beevor. Your comment is so wonderful.

[R Smith]

You are welcome my friend :)

[Tandin]

Very powerful and strongly written. Amazing job.... do keep up your good work dude

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Perkele.7885]

The poem is well constructed. Personally, I would have chosen a less ridged form of delivery. It has the feel of an application form to it. Do You comprehend me? Other than that, there are just, some grammar issues,. and I sense that English is not your Mother tongue. I like the poem

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Cool Girl]

Smiles can turn a bad day into a good one.. I love this piece! You did amazing :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome

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Smiles are powerful, indeed, and this one that 'spurs' you seems to be life changing. A wonderful write and great tribute to the smile... thanks for sharing!

P.S. In the last stanza, you use 'efficiency' but did you mean to use 'efficiently' or 'effectively' instead?

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[steven]

very touching, same thing i feel with a particular friend of mine, when she smiles nothing else matters and my problems go away...nice poem

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you very much Steven. Your comment is wonderful.