Your Smile

Your Smile

A Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir
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For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

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Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith

Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir


© 2015 Abderrahmane Dakir



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A smile is worth so much when it id given with a loving heart .You have a kind and generous soul my friend.Very beautiful write.Thank you so much for sharing such an uplifting write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Beautiful thoughts expressed here. I was able to visualize so many instances of comfort and encouragement. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Your poem made me smile. A wonderful delve into the power of smile, what it can mean to another, and how it can inspire those who receive it's glow. Very wonderful :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
very well written. great job

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Wow. Great read, loved the manner you played with the words. Keep it up. Thanks for the share

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
prince digbani

2 Years Ago

You are welcome
great poem, covers a lot of basis in life and emotions

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Beautifully written, covering all the emotions us mere mortals possess!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
That poem was very beautifully written ..keep it up :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Wow Abderrahmane, this poem is awesome! I especially liked the second last stanza. Keep up this good work!
:) 95/100

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
As i stated before...very well done. Rating remains the same 100

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on April 30, 2015
Last Updated on June 15, 2015
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Abderrahmane Dakir
Abderrahmane Dakir

casablanca, Morocco



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