Today was special

Today was special

A Poem by Daniealla Hosein
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There is always an effect when you've inflicted a cause towards someone

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May 18th, 2017. Today is very special, maybe to me and not to you but its very special. I know you don't know what I'm talking about but I mean, why would you? Why would anyone know? We all change because it's natural, it's all part of life. Today is so special because you became into an amazing person. You were perfect and I guess no one person can be perfect, right? Life had to change that and make you the person you are today. Today isn't special just because of you, today was the day when everything changed.  Today is special because we both changed but the difference is I'm still the same. -But I'll constantly drop my head in shame 
As for every word I spoke for you in defense, went in vain 
I thought it was worth it, believed you were the apple of my eye 
Little did I know you were going to be my optimum pain, all in disguise. 
Today was special.

© 2017 Daniealla Hosein



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The poem left a lot of questions for the reader. You danced on many subjects and thoughts. I did like the repetition. You left some thing for the reader to think about.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Daniealla Hosein

4 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm happy I left things to think about. Questions to be answered in my next piece :)
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Very good and you are welcome.
Wow the emotion conveyed in this piece is wonderful and I loved the way you spoke to the reader/the focus of the writing. One thing to look out for: mixing up tenses.
Amazing work!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Daniealla Hosein

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the review , I will work on that :)

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Daniealla Hosein
Daniealla Hosein

Trinidad and Tobago



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