Invisible voice

Invisible voice

A Poem by Daniealla Hosein
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Not everyone screaming for help can be heard

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I'm screaming, I'm yelling
But no one hears me; my pain is inaudible .
What is this strange feeling?
I can't see you 
But you can see me 
You've covered me In darkness so far away from light
My breathing is under pressure, I'm not winning at this game of 
Life
I'm screaming, I'm yelling
I can't walk away, 
I'm fighting fiercely right throughout the night until saved by day
I'm screaming, I'm yelling 
Till my voice disappears
The darkness inside me finally reappears 

© 2017 Daniealla Hosein



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Omge. Is it bad I relate to this on a personal level? I can completly understand this feeling 100%. Thank you for writing this! You have an interestingly strong way with words and I enjoy your work a lot

Posted 4 Months Ago


Daniealla Hosein

4 Months Ago

Thank you! That's great that you can relate, I'm glad someone understands and likes my work :)
Well expressed. Frustration smothered.

I would encourage you to consider finding a word that expresses the pain, a bit more.

I hope daybreak has arrived.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Daniealla Hosein

4 Months Ago

Thank you! I will dig deeper to find something and yes it has :)
Relatable read....well expressed :) x

Posted 4 Months Ago


Daniealla Hosein

4 Months Ago

Thank you:))

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Daniealla Hosein
Daniealla Hosein

Trinidad and Tobago



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