A walk to the light

A walk to the light

A Poem by Daniealla Hosein
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In every darkness, there will be a ray of light

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Blinking of realization, my pretense reality becomes intensely seen. The darkness fades as a ray of sunlight warms me through my bedroom window. It seems as if I'm no longer being held hostage; each restriction being released slowly.
Blood rushes through my body as I begin to feel my arms and legs. The numbness disappears as my bare feet touches the cold ground beneath me. My damp hair falls behind my shoulders; the dampness reminds me of the sweat I produced when I was restraint by darkness. Each step I take I feel more alive as I see the light shining through the doorway. My body willingly succumbs to walk away, to walk away from this lifestyle. A lifestyle, submissive to my inner darkness. A lifestyle which makes me suffer; but while pain is involuntarily, suffering is a choice. I feel the light hypnotizing me; happiness pulsing through my veins. Walking further into the light, I feel alienated by these feelings, feelings not to be compromised.

© 2017 Daniealla Hosein



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A lot said in the words. I wanted to know more.
"I feel the light hypnotizing me; happiness pulsing through my veins. Walking further into the light, I feel alienated by these feelings, feelings not to be compromised."
I liked the above lines. Hopeful and strong ending to the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniealla Hosein

1 Month Ago

Thank you! I'll work on making my pieces fully satisfying and not leaving the reader wanting more. :.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Good to make the reader want more and you are welcome my friend.



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A lot said in the words. I wanted to know more.
"I feel the light hypnotizing me; happiness pulsing through my veins. Walking further into the light, I feel alienated by these feelings, feelings not to be compromised."
I liked the above lines. Hopeful and strong ending to the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniealla Hosein

1 Month Ago

Thank you! I'll work on making my pieces fully satisfying and not leaving the reader wanting more. :.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Good to make the reader want more and you are welcome my friend.
I really like he descriptions used in this piece. Very nicely written!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniealla Hosein

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the review! :)

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Daniealla Hosein
Daniealla Hosein

Trinidad and Tobago



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