The Gentle gentleman

The Gentle gentleman

A Poem by Daniealla Hosein
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Sometimes the temporary time spent is enough for a lifetime.

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Innocent to mind ,
A gentleman rare to find.
Through his eyes I see,
A whole new world- I'm interested to feel

His hands soft to the touch,
I feel myself losing as he gains my trust.
His presence caresses my scarred soul,
Slowly melting my heart; from the freezing cold.

Our bittersweet likeness,
Pure to bliss.
Our time soon to be cut-
Effortlessly I'm sure to miss.

© 2017 Daniealla Hosein



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this is a very heart touching poem beautifully written
the sentences are wonderful

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniealla Hosein

1 Month Ago

Thank you! :)
Holding on to those precious moments feeds us when life makes us weary. This is a beautiful journey of that love..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniealla Hosein

1 Month Ago

Yes holding on does give us some motivation. Thank you for the review :)
Time can be so precious, and the memories so impressionable. Nice work, I enjoyed this...

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Daniealla Hosein

1 Month Ago

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Gentle and wonderful story shared in the poetry my friend. I liked the places, thoughts and the interaction in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniealla Hosein

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reviewing my piece and I'm glad you liked it :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome dear Daniealla.

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Daniealla Hosein
Daniealla Hosein

Trinidad and Tobago



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