WHY HATE WHEN YOU CAN LOVE

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WHY HATE WHEN YOU CAN LOVE?
I keep asking I keep asking
Why hate when you can love?
Do you hate him/her 'cause it didn't work out?
Do you hate him/her 'cause of love?
Or 'cause of envy?
Why do you hate when in fact you can channel it to love?
For if we learn to hate,
So we can learn to love
To love is to win
The hater suffers in mind and heart
The lover is liberated from all these
Until then, love he who hates you.
For love conquers all.

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

I do like this straight forward poem. Okay. But i would like to say the sentences needs to be broken into pieces so that they don't sound disharmonius to ear.No use of using him/her ,the reader herself can get whom you are pointing at.This sounds like a prose so to make it more lyrical you can use rhyming words.The lines have become too long or too short try to cut off the unneccessary lengthening of the lines. I suggested so you could improve.This poem has a Peaceful message for all humanity. :) *keep writing*

~Sophy

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thanks..cool suggestion...i WILL improve. i appreciate your review Sophy

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thanks man....i appreciate it

[Jamestown]

Absolutely agree with your words, I pray this will come to pass for all mankind.
I enjoyed your well written piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

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i appreciate ur review. thanks. we're all here to learn, one way or the other. i will be glad if you bring it out...thanks

[Su' Nacnetaf]

I think it is possible to hate and love at the same time, for love's true counterpart is indifference, from hate to love there's really only one small step. However i do agree that it is better to leave hate aside as it only consumes, in the worst way, one's essence. I don't know how else I would phrase a poem like this one, there's something that kind of makes it falter a little, but I cannot put my finger on it. It is a nice writing nevertheless and it was enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.