The Ultimate Sacrifice

The Ultimate Sacrifice

A Poem by DoormanDan
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How far would you go to protect those closest to you?

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The Ultimate Sacrifice


Is there a limit to what you'd give to protect those you love?

Would you ever get blinded by the lights of your darkest desires?

Through fields of fire and ice just how far would you run

To make sure that they survive the battle of their lives?

Would you be willing to lay down your life?


When the zero hour arrives with the warriors of midnight

Will you be ready to die to keep your loved ones alive?

When the day comes that you stare into Armageddon's eyes

Tell me, will you be ready to rise up and fight?


One day there will fall from the sky a scarlet snowflake

Will you run away or stay and fight the queen of despair?

Would you protect the broken ones until Death called your name

When they plead for a savior, but Salvation simply stares?

Or would you just let the Devil claim your Eden?


When the zero hour arrives with the warriors of midnight

Will you be ready to die to keep your loved ones alive?

When the day comes that you stare into Armageddon's eyes

Tell me, will you be ready to rise up and fight?


Will you be ready to fight, will you be willing to die

And become nothing more than a faint whisper of time

To make sure your loved ones make it out of the storm alive?

Or will you turn away and try to save your own life?

Will you fight or hide?


When the zero hour arrives, will you pick up the knife?

Will you be ready to die, make the ultimate sacrifice?

When the day comes that you're face to face with the Hydra

Tell me, will you be ready to rise up and fight?

© 2014 DoormanDan


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u writings look so professional....honestly.....great piece of work... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

your*...................................
DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words:)
well written, great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by to read this!
Interestingly written, nice images, good word flow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to review my writing!
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

My pleasure young man.
This was great! Your choice of words was great, it seemed like you tried not to use the same word too much and the flow was incredible, sounds like something I would write but my flow will never be that good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review! Dont give up so easily. My word flow use to be horrible! It gets better th.. read more
Whew, even being a Christian, this gave me the chills. I know most parents would fight to save their children in a fire or other natural or unnatural event. But at the end, when Jesus comes and the real battle begins, how can we know what He will put into our hands or minds. We can guess, but only God knows what we will face then. Valentine [Going to my library.]

Posted 9 Years Ago


DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
Valentine

9 Years Ago

For a young writer, you did very well on this. Valentine
DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Thanks:). I just believe that lyrics should be as original as they can be, so I just write in the m.. read more

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DoormanDan
DoormanDan

College Burnout, DE



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I'm a twenty one year old young man who enjoys writing poetry, songs, stories, paintball and other things. My favorite things to do are parkour, video games, listening to music, and making people hap.. more..

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