Now Nuance Negate

Now Nuance Negate

A Poem by Daniel Sutheran
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If a person does require an explanation into this poem's meaning, they should contact me personally.

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"I now know not the nuance negate,
nor negate the nuance no more;
for no nuance now ever will wait,
nor steer, not near, stir nor.

I know now not to nuance the gate,
which doth hold strong and still;
but now, know I, now at the gate,
need new nuance to till.

To know now not the nuance negate, 
doth flicker a wicker of know,
that nuancing gait need, new, a gate,
to flicker a wick down low.

Off nuancing gait - to sit, to wait,
somewhat negate, not know;
now, at the gate - not sit, not wait,
I steer and now do go.

At withering, winding, nuanced gate,
doth me, just me, alone arrive;
hard toil and hard to even wait,
for time to turn and thrive."

At that, he stepped from atop his stand,
walked silently home, 
and drank modestly from a teacup of coffee.

© 2014 Daniel Sutheran


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Well this is clever and also very rhythmical it took me back to learning object oriented programming and not being, being not a developer is nothing but endurance pass and go quickly. But sequentially speaking it does matter which way around you decide to negate where semantically it ofers a different dynamic. That aside the twist and turns are refrshing bubbly and joyful I even starting tapping with my index. Aslo worth pointing out that hthe subtle changes of words do make the story go by that if you are not paying attention you might get distracted by is captivating rhyme.

Bordering on addictive

Thankyou Dan

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Daniel Sutheran

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you picked up on the subtleties, especially with the changes of.. read more



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Well this is clever and also very rhythmical it took me back to learning object oriented programming and not being, being not a developer is nothing but endurance pass and go quickly. But sequentially speaking it does matter which way around you decide to negate where semantically it ofers a different dynamic. That aside the twist and turns are refrshing bubbly and joyful I even starting tapping with my index. Aslo worth pointing out that hthe subtle changes of words do make the story go by that if you are not paying attention you might get distracted by is captivating rhyme.

Bordering on addictive

Thankyou Dan

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Sutheran

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you picked up on the subtleties, especially with the changes of.. read more
I love this. It's got a sort of Spike Milligan esq rhythm to it, don't know if that was intentional but bravo nonetheless

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Sutheran

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I hadn't actually intended the Milligan-esque rhythm, but it's quite obvious now you've p.. read more

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Daniel Sutheran

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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