The Earth In Times Of War

The Earth In Times Of War

A Poem by daninstockholm
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I.

Irene digs into the earth with a worn spade

Turning over the soil like a slow prayer

And with each movement

Words come forth from the dirt

Black letters on white and silver signs,

Wrapped in dirt and sand

Words like

“Faith”

“Love”

“Freedom”

“Sacrifice”

Words of promise whispered

To her inner being

As if to remind her that her job

Isn’t just to lay people to rest

But to help those who remain and

To ponder why

 

II.

James was a proud man

He had been tilling this soil like his father before

And his father before him

He learned early in life to love the feel

Of the earth as it passed through his young fingers

He played with it, caressed it like a lover, listening

As if there were voices of stillness hidden

In those moments that he never heard anywhere else.

Words offered up to only his ears

Words like

“Belonging”

“Family”

“Sacrifice”

“Duty”

Words he never learned to question

From voices he recognized

Telling him this is where he belonged.

 

III.
Half a world away words fall silent. In

The wake of savage destruction the soil
Doesn’t whisper

But the howl is deafening.

 

IV.
James’ words could never have prepared

His son for this, dug into the

Blood-stained scorched earth

Kurt often thought of his father

And longed to be there, to tell him he was

Afraid, something he could never tell his friends

Something only his father could understand

He tried to run his fingers through the dirt

To hear the whispers his father told him about

Longing for the peace of words whispered to only him

Words like

“Peace”

“Quiet”

“Forgiveness”

“Belonging”

But war is a cruel Mistress and will take her toll.

 

V
Sometimes the earth cries

When a kindred soul is laid to rest

It cradles them into it like a mother

Whispering words for a sense of calm

Words like

“Rest”

“Peace”

“Eternity”

“Forgiveness”

Words that only the resting can hear

Not intended for us who remain

Nothing Irene can hear, nor James.

 

The words the earth has whispered to them before

Now ring hollow

Replaced by the sorrow of

Words like

“Pain”

“Greif”

“Loss”

 

When parents bury their young in times of war

The earth has no consoling words that suffice

The earth feels the grief too deeply.
It cannot whisper. It can only grieve.

As they walk away from their sons grave

Irene can no longer do her task of comforting

James no longer feels the ground like a lover

The reality of what they’ve given the earth

Is too painful.

 

VI.

Later that night, the wind blows through

The windows of James and Irenes house

Taking on an ancient task

Carrying the voices of those we’ve lost

To those who remain.

Comfort comes in the whispered words like

“Peace”

“Solace”

“Forgiveness”

The wind blows over the battlefields too

Soothing the earths’ wounds

Telling her lover

“This too shall pass”

 



 

© 2015 daninstockholm


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This was beautiful. I loved the personification of the earth and how it related to the people who cared for it. The earth shared in everything with its caretakers, from their times of joy, to their times of grief, to their times of moving on. It as well gives me an idea for a poem.

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!! Our connection to nature, the earth, the wind etc. goes much deeper than wh.. read more
KWP

8 Years Ago

everything is connected .... just like one big organism XX



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wow - well done - a beautiful piece of work - oh so thought provoking - asks one to just sit and meditate on all that has been said - and yes - this too will pass - but surely we can do our very best whilst we are here ?

Loved it X

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

kay, thank you so much for your kind words. i apologize for taking so long to acknowledge you! I'm .. read more
This was beautiful. I loved the personification of the earth and how it related to the people who cared for it. The earth shared in everything with its caretakers, from their times of joy, to their times of grief, to their times of moving on. It as well gives me an idea for a poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!! Our connection to nature, the earth, the wind etc. goes much deeper than wh.. read more
KWP

8 Years Ago

everything is connected .... just like one big organism XX
this work was riveting. loved the imagery here.

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Thank you again, it's refreshing to hear such kind words.
words drawn from the earthsoul just as a guitarist draws the blues from the strings...superb

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Thank you, so much!! :))
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Very good Saga anyway you life at nordic land. Great journey over human emotions . All good and bad mix together but very tasty. You got right words to right piece. You dont have to wish write half like me . You already did at your own unique style.

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Marketa! I truly appreciate your kind words!
a riveting and heartfelt write! enjoyed reading these vignettes! Well done! :)

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Indra, Thank you very much for stopping by, and for your kind words. I'm very happy you enjoyed it!
Indra Neil

8 Years Ago

u r most welcome! :)
The first thing that came to mind when I finished reading was Awwwwwwwwww!!! This is so sweet and beautiful.
'He played with it, caressed it like a lover' such grace in these words.
I love how you took a subject of such bitter and sad roots and handled it with such love, it truly shows how much care was given to it. Very nice.

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daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

Eliot, Thank you so much for your kind words. I have to say this one I am prooud of, and it's rare f.. read more

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daninstockholm

Stockholm, Sweden



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Time gives us moments made up of empty canvasses. How will you use yours? Happily married male, American born but now happy to be living in Stockholm, loves to learn and experience new things new p.. more..

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