Oh teacher

Oh teacher

A Poem by daninstockholm
"

Because sex isn't always love and love isn't always beautiful

"

I filled You with my seed

You a drawer without paper

Me a pond without tortoises

Our long days of searching

Never finding conclusion. 

 

I ran down Your streets

With your absolution on my brow

As the prostitutes beckoned

Oh Sir oh Sir

Can You fill one such as I?

You laughed at them, passions false prophets

You called them by name

Mythical beings selling mystical love

Passion without fulfilment but rich in promise.

 

I was your gypsy, your liniment

The one everyone knew

Your comforting aggravation

Your beggar Your fool

You were kind even though 

You hated the flower i brought You

 

Are my lessons done?

Are my lessons done?

 

We always have another one

 

I fill You with my seed

My next lesson has just begun

 

© 2015 daninstockholm


Author's Note

daninstockholm
Maybe a work in progress, written after reading the lyrics to a Leonard Cohen song. Any comments, as always, are welcome my friends.

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Leonard Cohen is one of my favourites, good work here.
Sex is as beautiful as it is ugly. All depends on the players and circumstances...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherry Pepperweb

8 Years Ago

Nope, it was not pretty. :)
You're welcome.
daninstockholm

8 Years Ago

no,, but in this instance i kinda liked it like that,, haha sometimes pretty isn't invited to the ba.. read more
Cherry Pepperweb

8 Years Ago

Lol. :)
That's true. It's not that kind of fairy tale I guess. :)

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Added on September 6, 2015
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Tags: Erotic, teachers, lessons, sex, life, beauty, hiding, pain, growing up

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daninstockholm
daninstockholm

Stockholm, Sweden



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Time gives us moments made up of empty canvasses. How will you use yours? Happily married male, American born but now happy to be living in Stockholm, loves to learn and experience new things new p.. more..

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