Still just a broken heart

!Beware! of stupid rants about my stupid life.

I miss you,
Can't even write a straight U
Not seeing the que,
So why is the sky blue?
I don't care, really, got no clue.

My writes hanging,
Thoughts banging
Maybe even breaking
My mind,
Kill me... No, i really don't mind.
Burn my home,
Turn the world upside down,
Got nothin to lose,
So what if i drown?
What do you care?
I know... It aint fair.
But why would i care?

What did ya expect?
His life and my life's torn apart,
So why would i care about anythin at all?
Two hearts broken,
Two lives in ruins...
Really... Kill me, i don't mind,
Doin me a favor,
Or maybe ya don't like that flavor?

He's taken,
Happiness stolen,
He is everything to me.
I lost everything,
He lost everything.



What do i care about the bloody world around me?
Should i admire it cuz of the tons of bullShit it holds for him and for me,
Or maybe i should forget what it did to him, and me. Maybe i should forgive it? forget it. Why move on? got no reason. Its not hope's season. Speakin of hope... Without him, I've got nothin, hope's and dreams included. Nothin. But they all wanna see a bloody smile on my stupid face, they all wanna see a smile on his face. Why would he do that? why would i do that? to satisfy some's never endin need to see fake smiles? they say they know... Did they walk the same miles? nope... They've got no clue. I'm not sayin He's all I've got just cuz i love him so much, but also cuz I've really got nothin, and no one else. Why would i stand up? so i can fall again for your amusement? forget it. Had enough of bein told what i should do. It wont fix anythin, it wont get me a step closer to him. Its no use, unless ya know how i can teleport, or magically just appear there, to be with him...well, you're no help. Its all beyond talk, and write. Its way over the line. And just incase you're wonderin... Yup... My poems will mostly be about heartbreak...if I'll even bother to write.

Author's Note

Yup... Just one of those moments when i really don't give a shit about anythin. Just sunk deep into never ending pain.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is fair. I like my Grandfather wisdom taught to me." Nothing good to say nothing. Words and bad actions lead to dead ends and permanent separation, that cannot be forgiven."
"Or maybe i should forget what it did to him, and me. Maybe i should forgive it? forget it. Why move on? got no reason. Its not hope's season. Speakin of hope... Without him, I've got nothin, hope's and dreams included. Nothin. "
Time make all wounds less painful. Something true friends will return. A powerful poem and thoughts.made me think tonight. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Creator]

Well, personally, after reading some of your outstanding work, I would say, that keep writing, no matter what it is about, just keep writing. Your poetry, your talent, the ease you play with words, and with the feelings of the readers is simply amazing, and considering your age, you are probably the most talented poet I ever read poems from. I noticed that you do not pay too much attention to the format... And that may make some people think that you are not a real poet... But to Hell with them, I see amazing and meaningful poetry coming from you. That is exactly why you must keep writing. And now to the poem. Saying straight what is on your mind, I believe that is one of your qualities to be admired. And yes, when people are down, broken, then the last thing they need is someone full of happiness, and hope, and positivity to be jumping around them, like a monkey, and acting like they can't understand, why you are not happy. And whats worse, they keep telling you to "cheer up"... I mean you would if you could. Right? Either way, another awesome piece Danny. Keep it coming.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You have no clue how right you are about it. Thank you very much :)

[Creator]

You are very welcome my friend. :)

[A writer]

Wow. Slap in the face :( I thought you're writing a poem... Well, I guess I'm not too helpful, because I don't know any of the things you've asked... As for talking about it... Thats all anyone can do for you. But you can always write about it, thats something you can do for yourself. I'm sorry all that happened to you. :(

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I know the lines, so spare the trouble. Just one question... Why wont ya accept that i gave up already? its all too little too late. Not your fault, no reason to try and make it right. You did all you could.

[A writer]

Nope... I did not do all I could. Why would you give up?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This aint the movies, kid. I'm not one of those action movie heroes who have one of the worst possible childhoods, and they become unbeatable... Nope... I'm very far from that. Life aint a story with a happy endin. My life is not gonna make me strong... I'm one of those who give up, who can't take it, the one that nobody cares about, the one that dies without anyone noticin. I'm just another life wasted, just a name on some paper, that will be erased when i die. My memory is that everyone did, and will forget me. Wake up kid, life to me aint no succes story, and never will be. I've got no opportunities ahead, I've got nothin but pain, disappointment. Just another one who gives up. Thats all.

[A writer]

Who are you calling "kid"? I'm sixteen, and you're fifteen... And all that you've said... That is not true. You are a wonderful person :) Don't give up! You just can't!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You're still missing the point. I did give up already. Its too late, done, no way back, no second chance, no nothin. Sorry, but you're words are pointless. I've got nothin and nobody to live for any more. I'm nothing, and nobody. Just like i was before i met my boyfriend. Now that we can't be together, i'm nothin and nobody again.

[A writer]

Look...even my patience has limits. You've gotta pull yourself together. And you're right, nobody cares about those who give up. So don't give up.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well then...you can start ignorin me, cuz i gave up.

[A writer]

I am not going to ignore you. Ever. Danny, I love you. Please don't talk like that.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Why not? can talkin end the pain? no, it can't. So what difference does anythin i say can make? nothin.

[A writer]

You are right. Its a big lie, it really does not help. Didn't help me either. But I don't know what else I can do. Well, I do, but you wont let me do that. Anyhow, you are strong, look at this write as on a moment of weakness... Nothing else.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Umm...i've got the idea... And forget about it. We aint gonna be doin that. i aint cheatin on my boyfriend.

[A writer]

I'm sorry. It was just another of my stupid hopes. But I only wanted to give you a huge hug. Nothing else. Just to make you feel better.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Is that right? either way, it all starts like that... And i don't want to get in that. i'm sorry.

[A writer]

What are you sorry for?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

For killin your dreams.

[A writer]

Do not worry about it :) atleast I can understand the pain you feel. So, I know what you must be feeling every day. Jesus... Now I get why you are so dark.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Right......

[A writer]

Now that I can totally understand the pain you feel.... I'm sorry for being such an a*****e towards you. I love you Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Let it go. Now you know, so just let it go.

[A writer]

Szeretném ha tudnád, hogy imádlak.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Tudom, de ezt most hagyd.

[A writer]

Ahogy gondolod. :) Szeretlek.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Ez mind rendben van... De ezt nem tudom viszonozni.

[A writer]

Én értem, de te is értsd meg, amit mondok. I love you.