Let the rain come to me

A poem about rain. I made another version with the "to me", "on me" or all of the other "me. " Hope you like it, no matter how simple it is

 

Thunder rolling

Clouds gathering

Air becomes moist

Let the rain come to me

 

Silver rain drops

Golden lightning

Gray clouds

Let the rain fall on me

 

Dripping

Flowing

Showering

Let the rain wash me

 

Thunder fading

Clouds leaving

Sun peeking though

Let the rain dry off me

 

Birds singing

Rain drops clinging

Flowers blooming

Let the land flourish around me

 

 

Author's Note

Do you like it with the "me"s in it?

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I think the "me's" are fine. A very nice poem. Thanks for sharing it. Sam