Sky

Six word poem

And the sky fell, 

almost soundlessly

Author's Note

Any suggestions?

Reviews

[Courtney]

This is amazing, I know it was for the "six word story contest" but perhaps for the poetry contest you could have played with a line break. I think that if you were to break it like "And the sky fell/ almost soundlessly"
having the "almost" begin a line would emphasised it all the more. But this is a very strong piece as is, great job!

[PyroKitty24]

It creates a vivid image in the mind. Nice

[lah to the 18th power]

It's wonderful! It says so much without saying anything at all.

[Miss Coral]

Powerful and simple. Aggressive and expressive.

Great job. :)

[_thesovo]

thanks for submitting this! it's amazing!

[Lucia]

soo short, but such powerful words. fascinating! Really gets me thinking...

[Alz Alz]

Wow... that's so awesome! i love short poems because, behind the words, there is so much meaning! i love this poem! one of my favorites! :)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the six-word story contest!