Someday I'll forget

Someday I'll forget

A Poem by Aldora Sparrow
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Just a little poem borne of boredom

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Someday I’ll forget the color of your eyes,

The smile that I loved will be strange,

The sound of your voice will be unfamiliar,

Everything that was to be will change

 

After a while, I won’t be able to recall

The way my heart would skip a beat

The fire that seared me at your touch

The comforting warmth, a scent so sweet

 

Someday I won’t remember

That I was once your Juliet,

‘Cause the feelings will have been gone

Thrown away, and pressed RESET

 

I turn away from you, a broken duet

And, someday, I'll forget.

 

 

And yet, somehow, I am happy we met.

 

© 2009 Aldora Sparrow


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I love this. It's absolutly beautiful! It has a very good rhyme scheme. You're a very good writer. I especially like how the end flows. It's almost like "P.S. Thanks!" This poem is cute, yet very powerful. I had a fun time reading this. One thing, though. At "Thrown away, I pressed the RESET". That kind of threw off the beat you had going. If it was something like "Thrown away, and pressed RESET" or something along those lines would keep the beat steady. But overall this poem was amazing. Keep up the good work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is lovely! It is so true that we forget the people we have met and you have expressed this beautifully in this poem. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love it. This really wonderful. A very good read!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this. It's absolutly beautiful! It has a very good rhyme scheme. You're a very good writer. I especially like how the end flows. It's almost like "P.S. Thanks!" This poem is cute, yet very powerful. I had a fun time reading this. One thing, though. At "Thrown away, I pressed the RESET". That kind of threw off the beat you had going. If it was something like "Thrown away, and pressed RESET" or something along those lines would keep the beat steady. But overall this poem was amazing. Keep up the good work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aldora Sparrow
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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..

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