Papery music

Papery music

A Poem by Aldora Sparrow
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Written for a contest. Not great, I know. Adagio, for those who don't know means, in music, in a leisurely manner; slowly.

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Gently guided by adagio

Harmoniously, easily gliding

That white swan with papery wings

Leaving rippling notes sliding

 




© 2010 Aldora Sparrow


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VERY NICE...FORM AND VISUAL IMAGE ..linked together...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Congrats on your winning poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love how your flowing form blends so well with the image! This was so beautiful, filled with a tenderness... Adagio fits so perfectly...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it. It is short and simple. Great Job:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Don't be so humble! I must admit this poem left me confused about what it's ablut but it sounds so beautyful!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 15, 2010
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Aldora Sparrow
Aldora Sparrow

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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..

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